The Monkey[]
- pg. 163
- The monkey is said to have "…murky amber eyes…". Later however (pg. 172), King writes "Looking over the top was a pair of glassy hazel eyes.". The eyes are again referred to as hazel on pages 180 and 192.
The Man Who Would Not Shake Hands[]
- pg. 328
- George tells us "There were four of us who were ready to sit down and play poker; we only wanted a fifth to make the evening a go.". King then writes that Jason Davidson tells him that George Oxley will not be coming due to a broken leg. This is when Henry Brower asks if he can join as the fifth. Yet when they all sit down (pg. 329-330) there are six at the table so they already had the five players they were supposedly waiting for.
- Players listed in order of their arrival/introduction at the table are (1)Henry Brower and (2)George Gregson. (3)Jason Davidson -who introduces- (4)Darrel Baker, (5)Andrew French, and (6)Jack Wilden.
- George tells us "There were four of us who were ready to sit down and play poker; we only wanted a fifth to make the evening a go.". King then writes that Jason Davidson tells him that George Oxley will not be coming due to a broken leg. This is when Henry Brower asks if he can join as the fifth. Yet when they all sit down (pg. 329-330) there are six at the table so they already had the five players they were supposedly waiting for.
- pg. 331-334
- The final hand (seven-card stud) is described over several pages, but there are several problems with the last hand:
- French calls seven-card stud, yet the players only get six cards. The initial three (2 down, 1 up) then 3 more rounds of 1 upcard each.
- Baker isn't mentioned during the initial deal and only re-appears on the 3rd round (fifth card).
- King writes (pg. 333) that Baker was anxious and "…pulled out one of his three down cards and turned it over to show four kings."
- He should have only 2 down cards, not three.
- King writes (pg. 334) "Brower had turned over all three of his down cards to reveal a straight flush, from the eight to the queen.". This is a 2 point error.
- He should have only 2 down cards, not three.
- This contradicts what we were told he was holding (see below).
- There are too many kings in play here. Darrel has his four Kings, but George also has the King of Hearts.
- The final hand (seven-card stud) is described over several pages, but there are several problems with the last hand:
Player | 1st deal | 2nd | 3rd | 4th |
---|---|---|---|---|
George Gregson | x♥ x♥ x♥ | x♥ | ?? | K♥ |
Jack Wilden | ?? ?? ?? | ?? | ?? | ?? |
Andrew French | ?? ?? ?? | ?? | ?? | ?? |
Jason Davidson | xx xx x♥ | 3? | A? | A? |
Henry Brower | ?? ?? 10♠ | J♠ | 2♦ | Q♣ |
Darrel Baker | ?? ?? K?* | ?? | K? | K? |
(*While George does not mention Baker getting this card, on the 3rd deal George says Baker gets a King, making a pair.)
Player | 1st deal | 2nd | 3rd | 4th | Result |
---|---|---|---|---|---|
George Gregson | x♥ x♥ x♥ | x♥ | K♥ | ♥-Flush | |
Jack Wilden | ?? ?? ?? | ?? | ?? | ?? | 1 Pair |
Andrew French | ?? ?? ?? | ?? | ?? | ?? | ?? |
Jason Davidson | A? A? A♥ | 3? | ?? | A? | 4-Aces |
Henry Brower | 8♠ 9♠ 10♠ | J♠ | 2♦ | Q♠ | Straight |
Darrel Baker | ?? K? K?* | ?? | K? | K? | 4-Kings |
( Note: All page numbers are from the Signet paperback, unless otherwise noted. )
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